Thursday, May 1, 2008

IM "NO" A RAYMOND MODEL !!!

I exist in this world with a purpose, but.................
I wanted to win in all competitions which i participated in schools, but................
I want myself to be content and satisfied with what i have, but.................
I want to eradicate poverty and terrorism, but..................
I wanted to be a cricketer and i practised hard, but................
I love my parents, sister and my friends, but...............
I want to visit the outerspace with my friends, but.............
I wish to have someone closer to my heart, but.............
I still enjoy my life now, but..............
Well..I am "NO" a Raymond Model !!!!

8 comments:

my inner world said...

a good and thought provoking writing. "but" reminds us of the other side of the things and of our short comings too:)

Chari said...

Too many but's man.

Are you really that dissatisfied with life?

Rajiv M said...

@my inner world

hope u assumed right on wat is hidden after "but" in every sentence...well can u list it down here???

Rajiv M said...

@chari

well...im not dissatisfied..but a lil disappointed that few things didnt happen which i wanted to..."but"...its fun!!

my inner world said...

even i wish i have interpretted the meaning of " but " in a correct manner. so have tried to complete the lines with the word " but"

I exist in this world with a purpose, but I realized that mere existing is not living.

I wanted to win in all competitions which i participated in schools, but in the process I didn’t realize I forgot to think that losing few competitions would teach me a lot.

I want myself to be content and satisfied with what i have, but this world will allow me to be content.

I want to eradicate poverty and terrorism, but I just wish that what if I were God

I wanted to be a cricketer and i practised hard, but I guess some things are better left the way they are.

I love my parents, sister and my friends, but I wish that this love would be unconditional.

I want to visit the outerspace with my friends, but how can I forget that the time I spend with them is just out of this world.

I wish to have someone closer to my heart, but I guess the lucky one is just trying too much of my patience.

I still enjoy my life now, but cant understand why am I unable to do so.?

Well..I am "NO" a Raymond Model !!!!

Rajiv M said...

@my inner world

i seriously admire the way u have explained...its jus amazing...im totally impressed with ur thoughts....u rock...
and yu wer almost perfect!!!

my inner world said...

thanks so very much for appreciating the words :)

Rajiv M said...

if someone doesnt appreciate that...then there is a very serious problem with that person...lol